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Juan selects all his horses from only the finest blood lines in the world irrespective of their breed. Looking for qualities as gaits, nobility, beauty and balance of mind, he has a proven performance record with his young horses that have also become very competitive at F.E.I Grand Prix. For this reason, many of them have been sold to riders throughout the world where they continue to succeed in the F.E.I. show ring. From
Pleasure horses to Grand Prix Horses, do not hesitate to contact us at info@juanmatute.com
Additional Comments 1.
In the entire “Play Section”, “Olympics
is misspelled”. 2.
“Spanish Individual
Participant.” Would perhaps read better in English as “Team
Member-Spain” 3.
2002. 2nd y
3rd place. Young Promesses Test. "Wallony/Gionso".
Delete the “y” 4.
2001. 1st and y
3rd place. Young Promesses Test. "Gionso". Delete the “y”. 5.
2004. Winner of
the Price "Best clasified
spanish horse in the big tour". It’s Prize not price. Would read
better “Winner of “Best
Classified Spanish Horse in the big Tour” 6.
“Member of the
Spanish National Team. 4th placed.” Delete the “d” in “placed”. 7.
I have never seen the term “Play Record” used except for
music sites. It should be “Show Achievements”, “Riding
Record” or “Show Records”.
Since your technician used a four letter word (i.e “Play”), it would
probably be very easy to change it to “Show
Record” which is broadly used. 8.
I would suggest eliminating the section which makes
reference to the Olympics in Athens as it is outdated. 9. “Closest Projects” does not mean anything in English… Perhaps you wish to consider simply replacing the header with”. 10.
Perhaps you might wish to consider the term “Reserve
Champion” instead of “Subcampeon”. 11.
I would suggest that you delete the term “Closest
Projects” and replace with “Additional
Distinctions” . |
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